There was a boy
who'd look into the sky
and asking his toy
when will the sky cry.
He'd take a peek
or two
to see if there's a leak
from the creek
in the sky.
He remembered once,
and only once,
for some time,
the rain danced,
along with the little boy
beside the fence.
et la pluie était de quatre ans de dos.
This is something that popped (literally) into my mind this afternoon when it rained.
The rain. =)
Ok, a few comments. I liked the metophors you used.
ReplyDeleteHe'd take a peek
or two
to see if there's a leak
from the creek
in the sky.
the word sky should be changed to "heavens", IMO. It appears one time too many.
Other than that, it's good!
hmm. kay. thanx =)
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